Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Revised thesis from school today

Zamyatin uses the symbols of glass and the great operation asa well as the conflict between the Mephi and the One State to war agains the resriction of civil liberties in times of conflict for security revealin that people need to balance the protection of their civil liberties with security

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  1. here, i redid the thesis a little to make it flow better. in a way that makes sense to me anyway. consider using it

    Zamyatin uses the symbols of glass, the great operation and the conflict between the Mephi and the One State to warn against the restriction of civil liberties in times of conflict to gain security revealing that people need to balance the protection of their civil liberties with security in order to achieve a stable society.

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  2. ya, i think the one Will has is the better of the two

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  3. im having a very difficult time finding quotes for my paragraph. so im going to try to write it right now, but it may not be totally done by tommoro. BUT i will try. i had to stay after school for a while and help out with japan night, which is on friday 5 30- 8 30 COME!!!!(were required to say that, but it is still pretty awsome)

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