Saturday, March 28, 2009

Thesis

I think we need to put down our thesis from the blue sheets (the ones about sentence structure and word choice). I think that is where we get our thesis from and then we pick the best one but i'm not sure i've posted on here blog asking for some clarity but i haven't heard anything back. So i think we just do the blue sheets and get thesis from those. I think we only had three more of them to do and i thought we handed them out before class ended on friday but i'm not sure.

2 comments:

  1. i cant remember either lol. my bags are at my moms though, and im not going there till tommoro. so i will comment then if i have one of the said sheets

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  2. i didnt really know where to post this, but here is the thesis statement that i came up with:

    through the novel WE, Yevgeny Zamyatin conveys the idea that external and internal confict in a society balence through the balencing of Previous external conflict(200 years war) and the need for protection(glass) and uprising within the current society(I-330) against the previously created protection(breaking the glass sheild). Zamyatin does this in order to reveal the constant balence of internal vs. external peace in a society.

    i know my "So What?" is a little off. please dont take this and make it our thesis, i would very much like you to understand it and interpret it in a way that makes sense ^_^. im good at ideas, just not communicating them. please post questions or something, i will be checking frequently as i work on my LAB.
    -tyyl will dewald

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